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Post by Dawnne on Aug 21, 2009 19:03:59 GMT -6
Hokai, well I'm sure you've already seen this drawing of mine:  Well, I never really got any good crits for it. o3o I watermarked it because, shut up, I'm afraid of it getting stolen. HAAA like anyone would steal my art. Hurr. Anyway, I would appreciate some feedback. :3 Thankies~ |
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Post by NYAAAAAAAAAA ^W^ on Aug 21, 2009 19:17:01 GMT -6
Okay I'm going to attempt to do some sort of critique but considering I've never done it before and my anatomy sucks...
Well, first of all, the coloring seems pretty good. The linearting on Anari seems pretty clean, I especially like it on her hair. I also do like the grassy background. Also nice job on doing the profile! I find profiles hard to do. As for shading, the shading on the head (that includes the hair) is my favorite.
Now to the actual critique part of this. There is something that seems sort of funny about how her body is facing the viewer but her head is completely turned away. I just tried to do some pose like that and it... sort of felt painful. Maybe you should have turned her body (my) right a little more? As I said, I'm not good with anatomy.
The transition from the light blue to the dark blue in the sky also looks like of weird. The clouds seem kind of... flat... I don't really have any suggestions for these, sorry.
That's really all I can think of at the moment. Still a nice traditional picture you did
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Post by Dawnne on Aug 21, 2009 19:55:55 GMT -6
Okay I'm going to attempt to do some sort of critique but considering I've never done it before and my anatomy sucks... Well, first of all, the coloring seems pretty good. The linearting on Anari seems pretty clean, I especially like it on her hair. I also do like the grassy background. Also nice job on doing the profile! I find profiles hard to do. As for shading, the shading on the head (that includes the hair) is my favorite. Now to the actual critique part of this. There is something that seems sort of funny about how her body is facing the viewer but her head is completely turned away. I just tried to do some pose like that and it... sort of felt painful. Maybe you should have turned her body (my) right a little more? As I said, I'm not good with anatomy. The transition from the light blue to the dark blue in the sky also looks like of weird. The clouds seem kind of... flat... I don't really have any suggestions for these, sorry. That's really all I can think of at the moment. Still a nice traditional picture you did Ahh, yeah the pose is a little difficult. What I was going for was her turning her head kinda fast, which is why her hair is all wavy and stuff. Not quite sure just how well I pulled that off. o_o; As for the clouds...yeahthey'reprettysuckish. >_>;; I hate clouds. Silly Dawnne, clouds aren't orange... Ah, but thanks for the critique. Cool beans, yo. :D |
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Post by NYAAAAAAAAAA ^W^ on Aug 21, 2009 22:08:31 GMT -6
If I could help, then I'm glad I could help.
If not, then thanks for reading my wall of text
Good luck
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Post by ⑨ on Aug 29, 2009 23:33:51 GMT -6
I, er, UH
I dunno
Oh, but I do think that you should understand that clothes are something placed on the body, and are an object, so you should make sure they have depth, wrinkles, and stuff on those sweet ass cheeks.
Also:
WHY SO SRS?
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Post by Dawnne on Aug 30, 2009 13:16:58 GMT -6
FFFFFFFFFFF EVERYTHING IS SRS FOOL.
...I probably should've mentioned that it looks slightly different IRL. It's a little darker IRL than it is on the compooter. I'm not saying it excuses any mistakes I've made (yeah, I could probably make the wrinkles darker...maybe I'll go back and fix that sometime when I'm not terrified of ruining it), but I just thought I'd throw that out there.
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