Just Dropping This Off here

[NYAAAAAAAAAA ^W^]

Not as good as the first. Felt a bit forced to do it at some times so I forced myself to finish it. But

LionSonozaki.deviantart.com/art/fma-doujinshi-thing-part-dso-136957849

Any suggestions on how to fix it, let me know. Once all that is done, then I'll get started on stuff :I